Monday, November 5, 2012

Excerpt #3


Corn and the others, including Orswald, started to search the crowd for those of whom they had desired to dance with. One by one each of them had found whom they sought and joined the rest of the dancers in the center, all except for Corn. He had another intention – hopes to get a better look at who this captivating girl was.

He weaved through the outlining crowd, which was now cheering the couples on. He made his way to the frontline and scanned the sea of faces across the square where he spotted the guards last. With squinted eyes he studied each person so as not to foolishly miss her due to carelessness. Suddenly he noticed the guards making their way to the frontline.

 The first two guards stepped away from each other opening the way for the girl. Corn’s eyes slowly widened as he watched the girl emerge from the shadows of the towering men. The lanterns that hung above played with her doll-like tan face. Her waist length brown hair consisted of a variety of unique braids that swung almost hypnotically as she glided forward. Above all it was not her hair, or even her fancy baby blue dress that made him completely motionless, it was the pair of wide, bright, emerald eyes that were looking right into his own.